This world, sure is uncertain!
It is vague, ambiguous,
and I am just a part of it.
I can't assure you I would be perfect,
I can't say I would be the best,
I might move with the flock
Carry on the daily chores without much enthusiasm,
My acts could be flawed,
I might....
just be another guy around...
..like how I had been all these years..
But my dear,
if there is anything I am certain about,
Anything I can assure you
and swear about,
Hear this my love,
"I would always love you
with all that I have got".
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Hmmmmmmmmmmm....!!!!
aaammmaaazzziiinnnggg
dear, got held up.......couldnt reply earlier...anyways....the poem is amazing....
unlike the classical hero...who promises everything....the protaganist here...equates himself to a common man.....and that touches a chord...that makes the protaganist - fragile and probably weak....but thats just the seeting ....u r cunningly....create....to tell with a force....like the classical hero...who wins against all odds.....i will love u...inspite of everything....beautiful and poetic
just one more suggestion.....why do u need word verification....or alllow only people with gmail id /open id to post alone....make commenting easier for people......for everybody....remove this restriction....if u want ...rather moderate ur comments...
thanx krish n pandi!!
Pandi, I did't try to be even remotely poetic.. I just wanted to write what i felt.. and those words r so very true!!
nice write-up. and i surely tell you, if you can promise this to your fiancee and live up to this promise alone, you will have a rewarding marital life. best of luck!!
need more rhyming ends ... would like to read more
promise has reached one heart already..........
keep the enthusiasm high....write more of these........
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